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Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Essay Directions and Rubric (will be handed out in class)


English Writing Prompt                                                                        Nombre ___________________________________________
Persuasive Essay                                                                        Fecha _________________ Hora ______ Nota ________ /250
On October 12 & 13, 2010, 33 Chilean miners were rescued from a collapsed mine below the Atacama Desert near Copiapo, Chile.  They had been trapped below ground for 69 & 70 days.  This disaster was long lasting and involved not only Chilean resources to resolve the situation, but rather a joining of resources from several countries and organizations.  Research how the disaster was handled and resolved citing/using examples of specific events that occurred during the process to rescue the miners and that led up to the collapse of the mine.  Then use this information to write a persuasive essay discussing how the United States should learn from this experience and suggesting how to improve its response to national disasters.  Use the items below to assist you.    
Prewriting items for contemplation:
1.     Your reaction to the miners’ survival and rescue.  How did they make it/survive for so long? How would you have fared in this situation?
2.     What lessons can be taken from Chile and applied to the US next time we have a disaster?
Think of our reactions to Katrina and the Oil Spill. What could we have done differently?  What are some factors that influence whether assistance is helpful, harmful or of no use?
·       International cooperation
·       Attitude of the victims
·       Reaction of the victims


                                               i.     Immediate survival mode
                                             ii.     Panicking
                                            iii.     Fighting
                                            iv.     Positive/Negative


·       Attitude of the rescue workers


                                               i.     Wasting time
                                             ii.     Determining blame
                                     iii.     Fighting
                                      iv.     Panicking


·       Attitude of the community & government
3.     The culture of Chile, the differences and similarities in Chile to the US.


·       People
·       Religion
·       Patriotism
·       Community
·       Resilience of Human Spirit
·       Ability to Survive




You will need:
·       Introduction with a theses statement
·       Body (3-4 paragraphs) with specific examples cited
·       Conclusion restating theses statement in new way

Essay must meet the following format requirements:
·       Typed, in Times New Roman 12, Double-spaced
·       Grammar and Spelling must be correct (we will proofread in class).
·       Additional research may be required.
·       Your outline is due in class for a grade on ___________________. (25)
·       Your rough draft is due in class for a grade on ____________________.  (75)
·       Your final copy is due in class for a grade on ______________________. (150)


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