Watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A.above
B. above
C. Ashton, Morgan, and Paxton's video can be found in Tuesday's post purple 2-bellringer.
20 comments:
David Whitaker purple 2 video 2
1. the accents were pretty good
2. don't look at the camera look at each other
3. her name is shakira
video 2- very good. maybe a little louder in the middle
1. Good Speaking!
2. Try & look at the camera a little bit more.
3. I could tell that is was about a lost child
Rosa Bigenho
P2
Video 2
video 3- louder, needs to be more correct
Estela Doughty P2
Video #3
It was very good in detail and you spoke clearly.
Needs a little more memorization.
video 1- good job, less accent.
video 2- could of been louder but overall good.
video 3- I really liked it but it could of been louder too.
purple 2 Rosalia Jones
video 1
spanish was well spoken
couldve been faster
the boy was lost from his mom
paco seitzinger-p2
video 4- good
Francisca Sluder purple 2
1. accents were good.
2. don't look at the camera so much
3. cinco
Hector Crowell
Like the sambrarro
Need to show some heart
Something about shakira
1. you were loud and clear!
2. You should try to be a little more creative.
3. You were trying to help the lost child.
Pancho Peek- p2
Jesus Perry
1. It was very funny
2. they spoke clearly
3. make it not so blury
Sara Lugo Purple 2 Video 1
1. good volume
2. needed better light
3. A child lost his parents and the girls were going to call his parents.
Clara Smith P2
don't look at the camera so much but stilly very clear and good
Magdelena Hollowell - P2
Video 2
1. You spoke it very cleary
2. don't talk so country
3. a lost child, then the police found her mom so she was excited. her mom's name was Shakira.
Silvia Osborne
1.Loud And Could Understand You.
2.Accent Was Good.
Looked Like You Were Having Fun.
Pablo Mathis P2
Good accents
Looked at camera too much
They were meeting each other
1. good spanish
2. speak louder
3. the mom lost her kid so the police was trying to help her find him
Hannah Croft
P2
Video 1
1. good spanish
2. speak louder
3. the police was trying to help the kid find her mom
Brianna BIgenho
P2
Video 1
1. good spanish
2. speak louder
3. The kid lost her mom so the police was trying to help her find her mom
Lakin Russel
P2
Video 1
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