watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A.
B. above
C. above
13 comments:
Catalina
1.They had good acting and facial expressions
2some words werent pronounced correctly
3. There was a spray painter and she was caught and got sent to jail
Diego
1) You had your back to the camera a lot
2) It sounded real good
3) The boy was lost and he told you his moms number and you called her
Lola Greenup Aka Beast
1. They Looked Really Good
2. They Camera Man Was Shakey
3. Got Pulled over by the cop :)
Ana Maria-----Camilla
1) You had good spanish and good acting!
2) Be more confident..but it was great!
3) I caught the name of the lost child.
Salvador
1. Great Jumping
2. Missed a cinco when repeating the phone nunber
3. Gave police the father's phone number and called him
Alejandro The Greatest
1. Spanish was flawless.
2. Chase needs to enunciate.
3. Cop walked up
Camila----The Lost Child!
1. Good acting and it was funny.
2. The screen was a little to close.
3. Their was a lost child and the policewomen found her and helped her find her mother.
Juan
Video 1
1. they looked like they had fun
2. to speak up a lil bit
3. that they were looking for the lost child's mom
Marisol
The spanish was good
and all the repeating was right :)
awsome video
Ramirez #1
1) Those were some sweet jumps at the beginning.
2) Chase barely even did anything.
3) Lost child was reunited with his parent by awesome officers.
Eva
video #3
1. They had some good ideas and their words were easy to hear and comprehend. Their bloopers were funny:)
2. They didn't have a very big theme..
3. The movie was about a lost child who had lost their mother and was interviewed for information by a cop!
Sara & Gabriela
1. They spoke clearly.
2. They could've been louder so we could have heard them.
3. someone got pulled over.
Jose
1)The last part wasn't necessary at all.
2)It sounded good.
3)Back to the camera alot.
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