Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. see above
B. above
C. above
Monday, September 6, 2010
Purple 1-Bellringer
Watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. see above
B. above
C. above
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. see above
B. above
C. above
14 comments:
Paco Neihoff.
We said whats your name mother instead of whats your mothers name.
video name- Police
Sara Wilkerson
Poca & carlos
1.) your movie was very creative
2.) you messed up on asking what's your mothers name
3.) Run away fugative thats what carlos said
Felipe-P1 The first one, it was very humorous, something you can improve on is to try and hold the camera a little steadier, and what was happening was that the lost child was wanting to go search for his mother.
The video that i like the most would probably be sarah's .... but i think they should have looked at the camera more to show eye contact to there audience. But other than that the video was very good
Eva-P1
The 2nd one was good, but they could've turned the volume up on the audio. I think they probably could've been a little bit more creative then just sitting at a table. I was confused, because it seemed like an interview not a lost child. BUT I really loved it and they did great!
Carmen-P1
The third video was really funny and they pronounced everything really well! They didn't look up at the camera a lot. The lost child's name was Sierra and she was being arrested.
The video i that i like the most was sarah they did a really good job entertaining there audience... The thing i think they could have to improve was to show eyea contact toward the audience
Ramona
Leon - P1
First.
1. IT WAS HILARIOUS
2. would have been better if it didn't stop freezing while the chase was going on
3. understood the fact that he was lost
Rosalia P1
The last video was very good and funny. You could have let your words flow a little bit better but it was still good and I liked it. I think that someone was vandalizing something and the policeman was getting their name, parents name, and phone number.
Leonardo Anderson-P1
1st movie
1. It was absolutely hilarious, and you did pretty good with the spanish also.
2. You could have given the characters more personality.
3. A police officer finds a lost child, and tries to find his parents, but the kid runs away soon after they meet.
I liked the first video the most.
They did really good and it had more action to it, and they really didnt have to improve anything on there video.
Paquita.
Shakira P1
1. I liked your humor
2. You read of the script
3. It was a mexican jumping the border
Jesús Edem
i am commenting on neihoffs video where they did a very good job but they said whats your name mother insted
Paquita P1
1. They did really good of acting it out.
2. More Movement.
3. It was really good and they didnt have to use there script as much
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