Watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. above
B. above
C. above
9 comments:
Carmen Hartig-P1
Video one was really good and had good props and costumes.
The only thing that could have been better is if the volume was turned up some. The lost child's name was Ramona.
Rosalia P1
The first video was very good and had great acting! The police could have talked just a little louder but it was still very good and I enjoyed it! :)
Léon
A.
1. it was really good on the pronunciation
2. You could have spoke up a little or enhanced the audio
3. i understood the entire concept SERIOUSLY good job!!!
1.They had good spanish
2. It was very loud and hard to hear due to all the ruckus in the classroom.
3. The little kid was
Enrique
Preston O'Donley
Enrique P1
1.It was really on the speaking part
2.It was hard to hear due to the ruckus all the kids were making
3.The concept was easily understood how the kid was lost and his mom was found.
Leonardo-P1
VIdeo 1
1.) Great costumes, and good job on showing the traits of the characters.
2.) While the spanish was very clear, it got a little bit slow when you got to the phone numbers. Try to keep it moving a little bit more so you can keep the viewers attention.
3.) Lost child can't find her mother. So a cop gets her phone number to call her mother. The child is reunited with her mother.
carson's
was good but it needed a little more action
Carlos Jones-P1
Good props good acting i really liked the way yall did your video the audio could have been a little louder but overall Ramona did well and the cop did well very good job
The video i like the was Ramona which was mine because it was really fun creating it... I think we need more movement in the video !
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