Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. above
B. above
C. above
Monday, September 6, 2010
Purple 2-Bellringer
Watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. above
B. above
C. above
Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.
A. above
B. above
C. above
23 comments:
1. You had a cute little pup.
2. Some words were not pronounced right.
3. You took the girl into custody for spray painting.
Enrique-P1
Video 3
1-Sounded like spanish!!
2-Not all things were pronounced correct
3-There was a lost child
Video 1
Victoria-P2
Jesús Perry
P2
Sam, Matt, and Blake
1. You spoke very clearly
2. Sam you were very annoying
3. And i couldn't understand if you lost your mother or your child
video 3- longer, louder, and thats all
1). He's climbing in your windows....snatching your people up. HAHA! Love that video so much.
2).Very low voice
3). A rapist stole (red head) and the dad went to the police and the police brutally murdered and tazed the rapist.
Bravo!
1. spanish was clear
2. more accent couldve been used
3.there was a lost child and they were trying to find his mom
paco seitzinger- P2
video 1
david p2
video one
1. got your numbers right
2. you need to work on your accents
3. the lost child's name is salvador and his mother's name is nancy
Video 1- I like the enthusiasm, but you could pronounce better and slow down.
Video 2- Nice hair :) and it needs to be louder next time.
Video 3- I like the outfits, but it was a little too short.
1. I loved the opening song. (hahaha)
2. The volume was kind of crappy.
3. A child got kidnapped and rape and the father was reporting him missing.
Pablo Mathis-P2
1. Very Funny
2. Needs to Speak Louder
3. The video was not loud enough, but I could tell that the guy was telling the father that his son was kidnapped.
video 1- stick to the subject, no dumb bloopers.
1.) It was funny
2.) You looked at the script too much.
3.) You killed the criminal with a spear.
Salvador Edwards - P2
Video 2
Juan Moore
Video 2
1. Blake took being raped like a champ...
2. looked at your notes too much
3. Johnathan was Blakes father
1. Pronounced the words well.
2. You should take it a little more seriously.
3. You helped the lost child.
Pancho- P2
Video 3
ya did good son ya did good
Sam's annoying
Sam lost his mom
1) I loved the song, I'm gonna put that on my ipod
2) the video was great and had a good plot, very funny about rapists
3) loved that the rapist got tazed
1)Funny
2) Speak more Clearly
3)The video was very funny but needs to speak louder
Clara Smith P2
Estela Doughty
P2
Video 3
Very good Spanish.
Too calm for an upset child.
Sara Lugo P2
1. awesome opening song.
2. not very loud or long
3. a dad was reporting his missing child
1. Accent was good!
2. Not everything was pronounce correctly.
3. Sam was an excited lost kid.
Carmen-P2
Video 1
1. Good Music!!
2. Try to look up at the camera
3. Kid was raped and yall was trying to help
Video 2
Morganne-P2
1-Love the song!
2-Try to pronounce things better!
3-They lost their child
Victoria-P2
Video-1
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