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Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Purple 4-Bellringer

Watch the following videos from your classmates. Provide any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. This means: something good, something they could improve presented in a POSITIVE, FRIENDLY, SUPPORTIVE, HELPFUL manner. Remember: They are taking a risk by putting themselves out there, and is not your job to be mean or bring them down. We build each other up in this class, so post your comments in a helpful manner. Anything excessively negative will result in a conference with me.

Your comments should state:
1) Something Good
2) Something to Improve
3) What you thought was happening in the video: the spanish you could catch: scenario, names, numbers, etc.


A. above


B.. above



12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Felipe Lowery-P1 The video made me laugh, you could have worked on getting a little more into the camera, and what was happening was that the lost child was getting help from the police officer, and I knew the numbers they were saying to each other.

Anonymous said...

It was good acting.
The sounds in the background were really loud.
The child was lost and the police helped her find his mom

-catalina

Anonymous said...

it was good and humorous to watch :)
Didnt find anything i thought yall needed improvement on
2 cops and lost child

-kelsey

Anonymous said...

It was chill.
There acting was good, for school students.
It was the best.
Zack, Eric, Jasons video

Anonymous said...

Camila
1. Good acting and dancing.
2. Needed to be louder couldn't hear.
3. Aurora was lost and she went to the cops for help.
Video- 1

Anonymous said...

Zack, Eric, Jasons video.

The acting was great.
Very good spanish
it tought me spanish

Anonymous said...

Salvador
1. Good Dancing
2. Speak a little louder
3. Child was lost and the police helped get her mom

Anonymous said...

Video #1
1. VERY good acting.
2. Could've spoke louder maybe.
3. They were helping a lost child find her parents.

Anonymous said...

Ramirez Myre
Good acting
Weird angle and loud background noise
I couldn't hear what you were saying, heard some numbers maybe

Anonymous said...

Video-1

*the dancing was a nice touch
*need to be louder
*the spanish that we could hear was really good :D

-Marisol

Anonymous said...

I liked every video


It's very good!!

Anonymous said...

Ana Maria's Video.
Nice dancing
Be more confident
Understood the telephone number.

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